We've all seen dbz
The image quality was rather poor, but the file is still 7.6MB. Try reducing the quality of the sounds(and getting more music, the happy sonic bonus stage music doesn't fit action that well). Were the sonic battle voice clips supposed to be high-pitched?
It seems that at any given time there is only one object actually moving. You should consider using more layers.
You seem to rely on too much on the typical "dbz sounds + spiffy effects" formula that seem to be the plague of every single sprite fight movie after that
one series did well.
idk why the voices were like that, that was the only music i could find, and thw sound effects were the only free ones alright
to the guy below
Maybe cuz ScytheBoy is the creator of VG cats and he wrote about "Posting it on NG on the front page"?
Cool flash, and epic music.
Keep up the good work
This should go to the alphas rather than to the portal.
For a trailer, it sure shows very little. And it sure is random.
I don't think this had any tweens in it?
Seriously, if this shows how the full version will look, then there is no point of making it. If it isn't good, then it will either get blammed, of it will drown in the stream on weak flashes.
I can see that you really want to makie this flash, so work hard
Oh and 5 10stars just to rise the score
Not to bad, could be better,but not bad.
There are some flaws though.
-One time the sprites are good quality, but next time theyr blurred
-Please, use more music. The Metal Slug theme got boring after 20 second.
-TO MUCH CURSING.
-The hand drawn blood looked out of place.
-The Heads in the dialog windows looked really bad
(Oh and from sahara to japan by tank? Whoa)
One of the best "My First Flash"es I saw today.
Even though the sprites were poor quality, and the "boxes" in the last scene totally ruined the mood, i have to say that this is one of the best "NewbFlashes" i saw today. But:
-The punch sound started to hurt my ears after the first 2 attacks.
-Could use some "Hit Effects" (see random SF:3rd strike flash and you'll know what I mean)
-You shouldnt juggle the backgrounds so much. Better use less but with better quality.
-To much boring talking.
But as I said,for a first try it was not bad.
A few thing to improve:
-More clay-less windows
-This was just tooo random, I don't even know what this was about.
-I could see your hand
-More photos->slicker animation
No offence dude, but if you submit a flash named "my first klaymation" and there is more useless windows and flash screens that the actuall claymation, then wtf?
Also, this looked like You did it in, hmmm...30-70minutes? The "explosion" looked like you dropped the camera and them freddy kruger attacked the clay figure. Try harder, It's not that hard to make a cool claymation.
But just 'cuz i feel like rising your score, I'm giving you a 4.
For a first try, not bad
First of all, the first 2 scenes should be pixelated. MMZ1 or MMX3 backgrounds would go nicely with that..."cave"?
Secondly, you should zoom use zoom, cuz the camera is to far, and shows to much unused space. I can also see that you tried using special effects. If you want some speciall efects, just google "Street Fighter 3rd strike sprites" and you come to a site that has all street fighter sprites, but also some special effect sprites (but if you want to be oryginal, use youre own, self-made speciall effects, cuz now nearly every fighting flash has effects from that game.
And lastly, zero moves just badly, like in a low budget racing game. In the beginning, instead of making him run up-down, you could just make him dash from one spot to another.
First of all, i understand that it is a "Trailer" and I know that i shouldnt expect much from a trailer, but dude, Static sprites and flashes?
If it is a trailer, then it should show some story, a bit of fight, a dialog or something like that.
Only one button works, and others generate a "Sound Bug" where the music starts over every time i go back to the Main Menu.
If this is supposed to make people watch your finished movie, that is fails to.
I'm not trying to be mean or something like that, I'm just saying that you should put more work into your submissions.
one of the best anmations I saw here on NG.
If you make more, than this could turn into a very succesfull series.
In other words: MAKE MORE!
it's nice an'stuff but not worth the 1st place.
let' give it a 3.
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